Company Top level Authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to take any decisions. Discuss
Decision making not only requires collection of facts and data, it demands a real experience of the situation and empathetic approaches; it is only feasible if employees are involved in decision making process because being a part of organization they have more reliable data on workforce issues.
Organization is a group of people who direct their actions towards attainment of a common goal; therefore middle and low level employees can provide more efficient solutions or decisions which will enhance productivity because higher level people generally have less penetrating data on actual alternatives out of which a best can be selected in decision making process effectively by the employees.
Most of the time employees feel left behind and compelled by the decisions imposed by the higher authorities on them and sometimes that decision is not even practical which leads to wastage of manforce. For instance, during my clinical practice as a nurse, our manager initiated half hourly rounds in patients’ room at night which wasted nurses’ valuable time of actual interventions and made patients so restless and sick that hospital stay time increased and brought negative outcomes which could be avoided if nurses could have involved in the decision making process.
In short, including employees in this process will also motivate them and make them feel significant in the organization which in turn will fortify better mutual relationships and uphill struggle. However the decision should be made finally by the managers but acquiring employees’ opinion will enhance implementation and fruitful outcome of the decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53754940711 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98955359106 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616600790514 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.5024630542 205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.9758422389 50.4703680194 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 233.5 104.977214359 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.1666666667 20.9669160288 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.25397266985 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.06582466293 0.242375264174 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403778404621 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309142203112 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0421228215378 0.151781067708 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218322704595 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 12.6369458128 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 53.1260098522 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.9458128079 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.74 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.94827586207 292% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.3980295567 181% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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