Recently, the phenomenon of teaching and dealing new crime cases in prisons, and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that replacing rehabilitation with punishment cannot be highly beneficial, such method regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals.
To begin with, there are various reasons to use different methods in order to decrease crime rate. At first, there are many branches of offence that could not forgive by law. However, for some offensive behaviors, rehabilitation is a way to send the lawbreaker back to the society. For example, for a man that who accustomed to use of elicit drugs, it is better to help him to cure instead of throw him in the jail.
In addition, for many crimes the best method is to keep criminals in prison. But the judges can use less sever methods to punish criminals. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2018 has shown that a significant number of offensive behaviors such as shop lifting and bullying could be judged to do community services and social activities as a punishment.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that rehabilitation reduce some crime rate, though for many offences extreme punishments is needed.
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but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26146788991 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07182282147 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651376146789 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.920584867 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.7 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 7.25397266985 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238945638672 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922946016995 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685876106075 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140342604812 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387189005458 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.