The disadvantages of tourism in less developed countries are as great as the advantages. What is your opinion?
Nowadays there is easy access to remote areas especially especially tourist spots because of better of transportation and improved quality of roads. Some people believe that tourism in under developed countries is not as beneficial as it might appear. This essay will discuss how tourism benefits outweigh its negative effects.
People thinking to go on a trip save a handsome amount of money before planning to go out because many expenditures are involved. This includes costs such as food, accommodation, purchasing from local areas and others. As more money is spent in these areas, economy flourishes of that area. For example, locals of Naran valley in Pakistan primarily earn their money because of tourism. Thus, they rise above poverty level and have equal opportunities for their children.
Tourism also helps in creating awareness among native people. Most of the naturally beautiful areas are far from cities and have limited modern facilities and majority of people residing in that have limited information about modern world. For instance, Chitral valley still has a low speed internet available for its residents which is hindrance in getting up to date information. Therefore, once people from different parts of the country come there and interact with local people, it can prove to be beneficial for awareness.
In conclusion, tourism helps in reduction of poverty level and make native people up to date. In my opinion, tourism has far more advantages than disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: especially
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.751339583 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649789029536 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9501832058 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2857142857 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115479102045 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450696304215 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640809319619 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832874470863 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584341100799 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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