Nowadays, due to the advancement of the technology, the community prefer to use cards rather than cash, which attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention from the public. Some people believe that using the cards offers many advantages, while on the other hand stands a perspective that there are many cons associated with using online card system. This essay will further elaborate on both benefits and drawbacks of the cardless society and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of benefits associated with using the online cards but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that it is more convinient way to transfer money from one place to another in few seconds. For instance, in early ages the people need to travel for hours to transfer money to other regions, but now they can simply send it from home by using the personal reference number of the assigned person. Thereby, the use of cardless system is indeed too great.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks that can certainly overwhelm the potential benefits of using cards and the most predominant one rooted in the fact that people who use cash no need to pay extra charges to the bank. Moreover, using cash is more secure than card because card can be stollen and lost anywhere. Therefore, the use of cash can protect people from any kind of theft.
In the view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some benefits the role of using the master cards in providing quick services is instrumental indeed.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9427480916 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51576522076 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557251908397 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1104897628 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0680358787512 0.242375264174 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314495643326 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025933503409 0.071462118173 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0461775447878 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226611750544 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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