Do you think cashless society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
In recent years, trend of cashless society has increased and society is moving more towards digital transactions. Many people claim that there are many benefits attributed with cashless transactions and promoting these will yield numerous uses to both country reputation and development of humans. While others reject this notion and argue that it is not beneficial to people living in rural areas. I personally believe that advantages of this payments will improve country's economic growth. This essay would further explain both sides with justifying reasons and thus lead to a appropriate conclusion.
To begin with, in fast growing world, every country is moving more towards digital transactions and there are several uses associated with it. Firstly, the important benefit is easy to track black money and block illegal transactions happening around the globe. Secondly, it improves transparency with these options throughout the country. Thirdly, it reduces the effort to carry cash and danger to avoid theft. We can use cashless payments such as online payments in all stores, groceries, to purchase anything from online. For example, recently in India, the Prime Minister has introduced e-wallet payment mode which decreased crime rates from 60% to 20%. This example clearly exemplifies us these transactions not only benefits to the country reputation but also reduces crime rate.
However, there are many pitfalls associated with cashless payments. People are having half knowledge on this and are exposed to cyber fraud. Even some citizens are losing their earned money because of online scams. Moreover, people living in village areas may not have such advancements and awareness of card transactions. In United states, a women got a call from unknown number saying that she won lottery of 1 million and in order to claim that, she has to pay 1000 dollars to process amount. The above example provides as people don't have enough knowledge and exposure to digital transactions.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that advantages outweighs disadvantages and further the government has to promote cashless payments through campaigns and educate people with proper guidlines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, as to, even so, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1207.87684729 157% => OK
No of words: 345.0 242.827586207 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48115942029 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73094551979 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 139.433497537 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611594202899 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 379.143842365 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0131228674 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5263157895 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26315789474 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0807134471284 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0239260181979 0.0925447433944 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421568266263 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596588463122 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440509724917 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 55.0591133005 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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