Do you think consumer should avoid over packed products or it is responsibility of producer to avoid extra packaging of products? Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
The effect of wrapping goods on markets and stores, which was always debatable, has now become controversial. The substantial influence of plastic bags causing environmental issues has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on the planet in recent years. This essay will elaborate on how consumers and producers should be more conscious about over packing goods and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are many reasons why not recycle packages of products should be banned, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that plastic, paper and other kinds of packaging are daily been thrown on the ocean, killing uncountable animals and polluting the environment. In addition to this fact, the life of animals is compromised because of the attitudes of people who do not reuse bags, rather they leave it to put the planet in danger.
Another key justification for upholding this notion is that some products do not need to be packed. For example, once in a supermarket, the consumers should be able to buy groceries and stock it in reusable bags. In addition, some products should be sold by itself and not overwrapped in thousand of useless boxes. For instance, the owners of stores and brands play a vital role in this problem.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that both, consumer and producer, should be better instructed regarding the stock of products and goods, although the producers care more responsibility in this matter, therefore the situation should be well handled
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...e sold by itself and not overwrapped in thousand of useless boxes. For instance, the own...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06976744186 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76176866226 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1060937068 50.4703680194 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.8 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154289467807 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577013444187 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415924967886 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923382757714 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144752006456 0.0609392437508 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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