Do you think extreme sports are good are should be avoided?
Extreme sports or adventurous sports such as skiing, sky-diving, mountain biking, rock climbing, parachuting, bungee-jumping and scuba-diving have become popular activities today. Some people think that they are good sports, thrilling and boosting their mental health, while others argue that they are very dangerous and harmful. I am inclined to believe that these sports are in fact dangerous and they should not be promoted. The following paragraphs will analyze their disadvantages and suggest other better sports for people to participate.
First of all, though the extreme sports help to build confidence, motivation, fulfillment and happy and also to get rid of frustration, stress and other bad emotions, they are quite perilous and risky to human life. These kinds of sports have always chances of fatal accidents that will happen. Also family, relatives and friends worry about us and our safety. For instance, Formula One world champion Michael Schumacher met with an accident while skiing and is still suffering from serious head injury.
Second of all, there are a variety of other forms of sports that are just as exhilarating and interesting as extreme sports for people to play. They are not only safer but also bring a feeling of relaxation and entertainment to players. For example, sports such as tennis, football, volleyball and cricket are tremendously fun, good to physical health and also safe.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that extreme sports are extremely dangerous and should not be recommended to people to participate. Further, it is expected that the people make cognizance of the fact and the governments must create awareness to educate people about the disadvantages of extreme sports.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 8.36945812808 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42335766423 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83874985148 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594890510949 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3249498401 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.307692308 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.25397266985 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24687819216 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852384819723 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752516528104 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151343274392 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553312653039 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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