Do you think that place where the person grew has an influence on his accomplishments? Explain with example.
These days there is an ongoing debate between the people who think that place of a person in which a person grows plays a vital role in his or her career. The essay will further elaborate the reasons and explanations for the notation and thus deduce the dialectic conclusion.
At the outset, a myriad of benefits can be attributed the importance of native place that influences the person in their career. For instance, people living in remote areas where there is no light and electricity results in difficulty while achieving their goals. However, people living in metropolitan cities have best facilities which help them to achieve their goals. Hence, some people believe that place of a person influences the personal growth. I feel that government should improve the infrastructure of remote ares, so that hidden talent in such areas can be explored.
On the other hand, a person can achieve their goals with hard work and strong dedication irrespective of anything. For instance, Sundar Pichai belongs to a small place in India but he became Google CEO with dedication and determination. In spite of very less facilities available for Sundar during childhood, he achieved the highest rank in Google.
After analyzing, it can be concluded that native place influence person's growth in life but achievements can be accomplished by hard work and dedication.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the best'.
Suggestion: have the best
...r, people living in metropolitan cities have best facilities which help them to achieve t...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun facilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ion and determination. In spite of very less facilities available for Sundar during ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, for instance, i feel, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14349775785 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78545733179 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605381165919 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.7684948448 50.4703680194 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.272727273 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206779471458 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077454279836 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076119619838 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123190109858 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299453364027 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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