Education is important as it teach teaches ethics and life values as it teaches us practical things for future employment. What is your opinion?
In primitive times, people use to life in caves and killing animals, and this was due to no education. It is very difficult to think without education as it teaches ethics and life values that leads to future employment.
Education plays a vital role in development of human mankind as it teaches various values of life such behavior and respecting others. Moreover, education build confidence and discipline in child as children sit under one roof to obtain same set of moral values from a teacher, this could help children grow in a civilized way. It also help people to think in different ways, which results in overall growth of human mankind.
Life gives you challenges on daily basis and education prepares you to handle these challenges. Some people believe that individual should start working once he or she is capable of doing that particular job instead of completing education. I feel that working without education might give you benefit initially, but in a long-run this might not be beneficial and result in blocking your career. Moreover, government should keep track of people who are not completing their minimum education and start working.
In conclusion,I feel that education should be made compulsory with minimum age group as it will be beneficial for individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 212.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11320754717 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70684035216 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617924528302 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.48227519 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.4 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211559637743 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086145799623 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116337311038 0.071462118173 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128300780581 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884602017289 0.0609392437508 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.