Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace, so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract one from another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples.
Whether study and employment distract one from another or not has been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views both in favor and against the very idea of distraction of study and employment together from one another through multiple modes of communication be it a main stream media or be it the social media. Below in essay of mine I will try to enunciate that a person can manage study and work together with strong will power
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The most prominent reason of studying while working is that people get permotions when they persue new course during their job. Moreover, mostly big companies like TCS hire students from the campus and pay for the post graduation degree after hiring them, because they know that it will be beneficial for them in long term.
Continuing to this, when people go to abroad for study they do part time jobs to get some finacial support and to give the school fees. In addition, if people will do work and study together than they will be more creative and will have more potential towards the work. Furthermore, pursuing a degree while working can enhance the skills and gain knowledge.
While on the other hand, there are people who will continue to wrangling about the facts of employment and study together. I would like to conclude that employment and education cannot affect people they can manage both the tasks together with strong will power.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nd work together with strong will power . The most prominent reason of studying ...
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Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...n people go to abroad for study they do part time jobs to get some finacial support and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9296875 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51970688165 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4869874266 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.2 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153736608474 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677389982795 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043085467207 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947832450128 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448405514631 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.5 Out of 90
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