Motivation and practice are the two qualities which are essential to be successful in life. I am inclined to agree to the aforementioned topic. In this essay i will discuss why high inspiration coupled with enough practice is better than the formal classroom education.
Firstly, Motivation create hunger in individuals. Hunger creates passion towards goal and when an highly passionate individual learn anything then that person put in hundred percent efforts. Motivation brings honesty in a person which is again much needed attribute in learning. Honesty allows people to make correct assessment about themselves which is required to correct strategy. For example, people like Steve Jobs, Mukesh Ambani, they did not complete their formal education, and yet they became very successful in their respective life. So motivation drives a person to its core and that creates the wonders.
Secondly, Practice makes a man perfect. It is said that practice always returns with fruitful. People who relentlessly put in efforts in the direction of goal will definitely reach to zenith. To cite an example, achievements of Edison are known to everyone. He was sent back from school, and yet he made a great mark in the filed of science due to his continuous efforts towards his experiments.
In conclusion, In this essay, it was an attempt to explain why motivation and practice are much better than the formal education by an expert teacher in classroom. I think these two qualities are paramount in learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22633744856 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8192394171 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600823045267 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0419701688 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.375 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1875 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134550387386 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389751236197 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285638525241 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781971554126 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307046690965 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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