Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals.

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Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals.

The importance of Real change can be made at the government level.which was always database has now bemire more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. the substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. mi my opinion the former proposition appears to be more rational. this essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effect of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

There are myriad of reasons which was will further explain argument but the most preponderant one steam from the fact that Nowadays environment pollution is its very move and very fall a sicks. another pivotal aspect of this argument is that pollution is very dangerous for health. needless to say all these merits stand in a good stead.

However there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm they potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that the many cars truck and other pollution to fall by this thinks Besides .But the some people to service to bike and cars with this very falls pollution. Pollution problems is James and traffic and not follow the role people. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.

According to the arguments aforementioned above on can reach to a conclusion that benefits of environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless its potential should not be overlooked either.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13725490196 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74102218422 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.8396762391 50.4703680194 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.769230769 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223896201385 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786281802434 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141246690944 0.071462118173 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168012324774 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174395194598 0.0609392437508 286% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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