Environment is polluted by multiple factors in which most important is massive usage of fossil fuel, increased population and destruction of forest. In my opinion, these problems are rectified by individual as well as government to make environment unpolluted. The following paragraphs would elucidate possible reasons along with suitable examples.
To commence with, individuals can put their effort to minimize the pollution. Firstly, people can use public transport instead of private vehicles. For example, Electric train is best option to people who commute to office. Secondly, people can use electronic message system such as E-mail, Facebook, and Twitter to replace papers. As a result, deforestation will be decreased.
Adding further to reasons, Government can enforce strict norms and rules to make the environment real green. It has to spend more proportion of amount in national budget for public transport. Consequently, less usage of cars would decrease the usage of fuel. Secondly, campaign awareness programs will educate the people about ego-green. I would like to cite an example of GO-green programs can be conducted in public places.
To recapitulate, there are myriad factors are intended in environment pollution but to resolving the issue is in individual and government hand. Hence both of them should forward their best foot towards to curb the menace.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 176, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...e vehicles. For example, Electric train is best option to people who commute to office....
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Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e is in individual and government hand. Hence both of them should forward their best ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 212.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52830188679 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89516605259 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665094339623 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.272615488 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.1333333333 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1333333333 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145389859432 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446031484224 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453460502366 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804933540396 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116957031231 0.0609392437508 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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