Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree?
These days, there is a controversial debate among people about the intensive sport s limitation. There are a great number of people who interpret these sports as thoroughly constructive, while others hold an opponent view. I am inclined to believe that high-risk sport should be prohibited.
There are several reasons why I am not in favor of extreme sports. First of all, it is argued that there are several kinds of sports such as swimming and football that play a pivotal role in creating adroit people. This is attributed to the fact that these sports could create a feeling of accomplishment and competence, which consequently open avenues to new achievements so that athlete’s enthusiasm and determination will be amplified towards many daunting tasks. The data yielded by a current study has shown group sport and most importantly clear Correlation in sports, which increase people’s intentions in a more enjoyable way.
In addition, it is claimed that professional sport encourages people to compete for money also many sports stars are only concerned about money and fame and
they are not sufficient role models for children. This is to say that some measures can be taken by the government to stimulate more people to play safe sports, which would instill a strong feeling of self-esteem in an athlete so they are more likely to perform up to expectations in society. Specifically, a research study conducted by Yale University in 2015 has found that Sports without violence could enhance a person’s intellectual ability to make decisions related to social and personal life.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that safe sports enhance the efficiency and effectiveness of athletes’ evaluation and increases the sports start’s confidence. It is expected that institutions take cognizance of these facts and begin to adopt this way of sports.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, still, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 302.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33774834437 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11772859126 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 139.433497537 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596026490066 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5546025084 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.333333333 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148191428831 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572720956186 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409618537814 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821353843701 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277440136804 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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