Fresh water resources diminish in large cities in the world each years, what are the cause of this crucial problem? what are the solution?
The importance of the fresh water resources diminish in large cities in the world each year, which has always been debatable has now upsurge a lots of a argument in favor and against it, thus it has become even more controversial. The substantial influence of imitating celebrities has sparked influence controversy over the potential of this trend is an part of the society in the recent years. it can be agreed that the upside of imitating celebrities are instruments indeed, however it has some various drawbacks as well. this essay will be elaborate on both assertions and provide as well-weighted conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why the fresh water resources diminish in large cities in the world each year is unreservedly salient, but the most conspicuous one lies fact that the advantage. Therefore, it is vital time to appreciate both the significance to the fresh water is very important for human life for the overall amelioration of society.
however, it has some people who choose think differently and hold an opposing viewpoint, which can certainly overwhelm substantial influence on the fresh water resources diminish in large cities in the world each year? Nevertheless, the contradiction is rooted in the fact that advantage, hence, it is apparent that the download of the fresh water resources diminish in large cities in the world each year cannot be overlooked.
The above presented dissertation illustrates both perspectives about the impact of the fresh water resources diminish in large cities in the world each year. While it is evident it has various benefits, although its deleterious effect cannot be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'upsurged'.
Suggestion: upsurged
...which has always been debatable has now upsurge a lots of a argument in favor and again...
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Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...s always been debatable has now upsurge a lots of a argument in favor and against it, ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...een debatable has now upsurge a lots of a argument in favor and against it, thus ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...rsy over the potential of this trend is an part of the society in the recent years...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...art of the society in the recent years. it can be agreed that the upside of imitat...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... it has some various drawbacks as well. this essay will be elaborate on both asserti...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...e overall amelioration of society. however, it has some people who choose think di...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to think'
Suggestion: to think
... however, it has some people who choose think differently and hold an opposing viewpo...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...t advantage, hence, it is apparent that the download of the fresh water resources diminish i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95617305351 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518656716418 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6131284416 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.7 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350763598501 0.242375264174 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143798038774 0.0925447433944 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115870843271 0.071462118173 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233133428772 0.151781067708 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476309862658 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.