The government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop the country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Whether government should spent more money on science education or other subjects for countries development has been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views both in favor and against the very idea investing more on science subjects through multiple modes of communication be it a main stream media or be it the social media. Below in essay of mine I will try to enunciate the importance of science education and why regime should spend more money on science education.
First and foremost reason for spending more money on science subject is to make people more logical and less superstitious. Moreover, when people will study more about the universe and planet than, there will be a chance that they will not think much about the superstitions. In addition, there are many people in India and Bangladesh who believe in eye blinking is good or bad sign. Furthermore, with the help of science education they can overcome from these types of ilogical things.
Continuing to this, when children will learn about science than they will have a courage to do some experiments on their own. So in the country will have more scientists and more inventions will take place in terms of technology, medicine, electronics and others. Furthermore, then country can be independent and will not have to depend on other nations for buying the expensive sources.
While on the other hand, there are people who will still continue to wrangling about the facts of science and other subjects. I would like to conclude that a regime should spent more money on science education as other subject children can learn through other social sources.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 6.10837438424 278% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11418685121 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72626593559 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532871972318 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1630317462 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.166666667 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27528676956 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109241762357 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711930037504 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177017512452 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568422139541 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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