Governments promise continuous economic growth, but it's actually an illusion. Some people think that governments should abandon this. Please talk about the validity and the implications.
Economy is the vital part of any system. Governments of several countries give false factors of economic growth as it can be seen in reality that nothing has changed. As a result, many people argue that governments should avoid giving such wrong information. This essay will discuss the importance of giving correct information and its affects.
To begin with, wrong information about the economy will make peoples' investment waste. Many investors invest to get a profitable return and if the governments give them incorrect figures it may lead to huge loss for investors forcing them to take their capital out of the country. For instance, Salini a big construction company closed its business in Pakistan because government indicated of a rise in GDP which would have resulted in the growth of construction industry but it turned out to be wrong. Therefore, such illusions can be more harmful for the development of a country.
Secondly, false promises by the governments can create chaos in the country. Many graduates study the market before doing specialisation in any field as they choose their field by seeing the economic growth of that industry and if turns out to be wrong, it may lead them to crimes because of unemployment. For example, 40 percent increase in the crime rate was witnessed in Kenya and most of them were carried out by educated people after the economy collapsed as they were unemployed for a longer period of time. Thus, not fulfilling commitments will increase crime rate,
In conclusion, false information or promises by the government can lead to rise in the criminal activities and at the same time discourage the investors to invest in the country. In my opinion, the governments need to give correct figures about the economy in order to get developed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, secondly, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03020134228 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80278492775 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530201342282 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4407037382 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174463456835 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690718834205 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449385276021 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118030776714 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333962966606 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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