Holdays tour tourism
The potential for the tour and tourism to attract people is considerable with the evidence of a significant increase in number of tourists worldwide in the past decade. There are some people who like to stay in well organized hotels and do not pay much attention to the world outside that hotel, while others prefer roaming and sight-seeing so that they can acquire knowledge regarding culture, traditions and values of that particular area which seems like my kind of travel, so I am in accord with this second statement given.
In this context, I feel that the primary purpose of tourism is to expand the horizon of knowledge and to fortify the notion of strengthening multicultural society and world peace, staying in hotels will not serve this purpose. Analysis of ethnic customs, cultural values and lifestyle of people helps to transform cultural malpractice with healthy habits as we learn by observations.
Local community is also benefitted by traveling as there is exchange of ideas between locals and travelers which, in particular, advances their knowledge. It improves economic conditions of locals by motivating them to sell handicrafts and local cuisines; therefore, it provides them employment as well.
In short, tourism flourish healthy relationship among people hailed from different civilizations, thereby improves relationships. Tourism should involve roaming and being among the local community, not just staying in hotels, to serve its laudable purpose.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, well, while, i feel, in particular, in short, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4329004329 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92213243496 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632034632035 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4650777961 50.4703680194 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.875 104.977214359 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.875 20.9669160288 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.875 7.25397266985 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111169361935 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526414294661 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619802654468 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621409961342 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427691741424 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 12.6369458128 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 53.1260098522 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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