Imitating celebrities in sports and movies is good or bad??
Surely, there has no time in history where the lives of people have more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals imitating of celebrities in sports and movies has been one of the prominent topics in the temporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain the imitating celebrities in sports and movies are good or bad. Regarding this I would like to say that it has both sides good or bad. I am partially agreed with this statement. Let’s delve deeper about this in forthcoming paragraph.
To start, with the good point of the copy of celebrities are good or helpful for common man. For instance, there are huge celebrities who are so famous like Sachin Tendulkar and Amitabh Bacchan. Moreover, people want to do same as them thus they try to imitate them. Furthermore, masses want to do something different and strange in their life so they always try to copy of celebrities.
On the other hand, It has some negative impact too. Firstly, imitating of celebrities in sports and movies are not good all the time. However, in hockey team some of players are taking alcohol or drugs and so many young children follow them which give the bad impact on them. Secondly, in movies celebrities play a villain role and they did murdered, theft, kidnapping which also imitating by people and they try to find a good or easy way to do this.
Hammering the final nail of the coffin, I would like to say that people should try to imitating good things from sports person or movies stars.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some of the players; some players
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'murder'
Suggestion: murder
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73782771536 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56978516943 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543071161049 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1895677728 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480243510248 0.242375264174 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160403132757 0.0925447433944 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184390620541 0.071462118173 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291965844542 0.151781067708 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100298171857 0.0609392437508 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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