Impact of television shows on society?

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Impact of television shows on society?

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The above presented dissertation illustrates both perspectives about the impact television shows while it is evident that is dileterious effects cannot be ignored and have to be addressed and well balanced against its merits.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22321428571 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94368735952 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.5024630542 180% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.774476721 50.4703680194 348% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.0 104.977214359 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.3333333333 20.9669160288 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.25397266985 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212203625881 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732541758333 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727625470965 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107904463185 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643986132801 0.0609392437508 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 12.6369458128 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 53.1260098522 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.9458128079 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.94827586207 302% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.3980295567 162% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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