The importance of cars and airplanes in modern life. Give examples.

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The importance of cars and airplanes in modern life. Give examples.

The invention for cars and planes has played a vital in human's life. Scientist argue that these mode of transportation transformed the life into modern era, which is known today. In this essay, I shall be discussing about the importance of cars and airplanes in our life.

In recent years, the travel by cars and planes have increased in multiple folds due to globalization and the time taken by these mode is faster as compared to other modes such as train. For instance, the journey traveled by someone between New York to Los Angeles by train, it take 80 hours, whereas by plane it takes 6 hours. Moreover, people use to prefer planes instead of train while going to holidays due to reduction of travel time. This can be seen on any airport since they are completely occupied by passengers.

These days travel by car has become an essential factor for everyone as it is being used for many purpose like travelling to office, going for picnic or enjoying long drives. The recent study shows that most of the families in Unities States has minimum two cars.

In conclusion, planes and cars played a major role in transformation of life into modern era due to its time reduction and comfort.

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Average: 7.2 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The invention for cars and planes has played a vital i...
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Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...layed a vital in humans life. Scientist argue that these mode of transportation trans...
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Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Scientist) must be used with a third-person verb: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...layed a vital in humans life. Scientist argue that these mode of transportation trans...
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Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this mode' or 'these modes'?
Suggestion: this mode; these modes
...al in humans life. Scientist argue that these mode of transportation transformed the life ...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this mode' or 'these modes'?
Suggestion: this mode; these modes
... to globalization and the time taken by these mode is faster as compared to other modes su...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... the time taken by these mode is faster as compared to other modes such as train. ...
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Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...en New York to Los Angeles by train, it take 80 hours, whereas by plane it takes 6 h...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...lane it takes 6 hours. Moreover, people use to prefer planes instead of train while...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 1207.87684729 82% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71904761905 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53075862718 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 379.143842365 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0863856422 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186505845066 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822624268508 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964586158348 0.071462118173 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139257070234 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127830854486 0.0609392437508 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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