The importance of cars and airplanes in modern life. Give examples.

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The importance of cars and airplanes in modern life. Give examples.

In modern era, in the faster world, every individual have lot works and so they have to act as machine. Of course, vehicles are very important part in our life and so we can manage all works in our time periods. cars and airplanes are very importance carriages. So, I will discuss some points in further paragraphs.

First of all, cars are very imoportance in our daily works, we can go for long as well as short distance. Moreover, car have more space so we can travel with our family and also get protection against dust, wind and sun rays. Also, lot of things can cover in the cars for example many people go to the mall or supermarket for buying domestic items and many more which is possible by cars beacause you can manage all things with carefully. Furthermore, you can complete all the works with minimum time periodes so we can save our precious time.

Moreover, airplanes are only one way that people can travel more kilometers within minutes. In the global world, more countries are coming near by near so people more and more travel from one nation to other nations. In addition, most countries their products export to overseas by using aircrafts. It is true that the most importance thing is that every people want sky travelling and see entire world.

To sum-up, although there are many vehicle where people use in daily works but carriages and aircraft have more characteristics which are increasing importance for selecting good choice.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cars
...n manage all works in our time periods. cars and airplanes are very importance carri...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...global world, more countries are coming near by near so people more and more travel fro...
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Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun vehicle seems to be countable; consider using: 'many vehicles'.
Suggestion: many vehicles
...world. To sum-up, although there are many vehicle where people use in daily works but car...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'vehicles'?
Suggestion: vehicles
.... To sum-up, although there are many vehicle where people use in daily works but car...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, of course, as well as, first of all, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79841897233 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4729820032 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6587086414 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3846153846 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136395913806 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626676676132 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866771728373 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860926641002 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627958363026 0.0609392437508 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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