The information revolution has changed the way of mass communication and had some negative effects on individual lives as well on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Information is a very powerful thing in the current world in mass communication. In the current world, the big data related to the information is the centre of attraction of hackers. The uses of that information can be affected by the personal lives of people.
In my personal view, the information revolution is the most critical situation. For example, we can share our information on Facebook, Instagram and other social media. They can sell the information to the agencies of advertisement. The result would be they can be sent the advertisement to our Facebook page according to our personal information. So, information can change the lives of people so, whenever we can share the information to the social media we have to be careful about our sharing information like personal contacts, Ages, family member information and all.
It would be affected by the society as well. Nowadays. there is a trend to make lives videos in social media related to the real things happened in society. That kind of information would not be better to see everyone. The children might be affected by that kind of information. so, in my view, the information revolution is the critical thing for the current world.
so, before we can share any information into the social media we have to be careful that the thing which would not be affected in our personal life and society later.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for example, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 5.75862068966 382% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92703862661 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89989681475 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 139.433497537 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437768240343 0.580463131201 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7890571545 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119373144895 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547574403527 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327990556581 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817191184577 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348231004453 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.32886699507 84% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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