Information revolution has changed the way of mass communications and had some bad and good effects on individual lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
one of the most conspicuous trends in today's world is a colossal upsurge in people thinking that the information revolution has changed the way how mass communication works. there is a widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns as opponents tend to believe that it has some negative impact on individuals. However, in my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and can be rejected.
there is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is the benefits that information revolution offered so far not only helped in broadening the horizons of the world but also aids in various other fields like medical science, education, agriculture and more. For instance, according to a recent survey undertaken by some experts from a famous university in South Wales asserts that advancements in information technology have enhanced the educational standards of students in developing as well as developed countries.
Another pivotal aspect is that in the field of science and technology it paved the way for major inventions. For example, in this century the number of new satellites which were launched successfully to space for various purposes has grown drastically.
In view of the aforementioned statements, one can conclude that the merits of the information revolution outweigh the demerits. The new generation should be intelligent enough to use the benefits wisely which can lead to a glorious future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28017241379 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12373339373 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1981208862 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127596529185 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433809305154 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538668968038 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068851558449 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431208738507 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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