With internet improvements, people can share views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is this a good or a bad thing? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Internet is one of the fruitful outcomes of technology, which has brought a revolution in every realm such as business, education and so on, which in turn has also facilitated people to conveniently find or share their views. However, some opine that the internet has become a pathway for the people to share their opinions about the products and services, thereby prove an essential factor in shopping realm. Thus, I am going to present both negative and positive views over this development.
To begin with, internet has become a common medium of sharing thoughts or opinions, and its footprints can be seen in the mindset of people when they purchase any product, and hence it may results humongous negative effects. Firstly, internet has been proved to be a viable alternative for advertisements of manifold shopping items and services, which in turn has made companies to take the best out of it and sometimes use fake reviews and views for any service and item for escalating sales, consequently it can be an erroneous for the people. On the top of that, it can make people very sceptical before buying any product because the views and opinions on internet are the combination of both authentic and false information, which is again not in favor of people.
On the other hand, this hectic world has made everyone to seek internet as an option to carry out plethora things, correspondingly it can be lucrative for the people to refer views on the internet for any service or commodity. Firstly, it becomes as an instrumental for the people when it comes to buy any product or service. Furthermore, there are more benefits of sharing opinions because it will allow people to know about the differences in prices of product, which are maintained by local shopkeepers and shopping sites. In addition, it also ensures hassle free shopping for the people. For instance, it has been found in many surveys that people now buy products after referring all views and reviews regarding any product or item.
In conclusion, It is an unequivocal that internet is a cloud of vast information therefore it is up to an individual to use it in a best possible way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Line 13, column 121, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... it is up to an individual to use it in a best possible way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1207.87684729 145% => OK
No of words: 360.0 242.827586207 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 3.92707691288 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73754756427 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505555555556 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 379.143842365 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.8565359956 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 104.977214359 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.9669160288 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.25397266985 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213013168836 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857933687651 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528722090209 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12997388601 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636468817942 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.