It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In contemporary society, whether to get married before completing education or not has attracted a heated debate. There is a dichotomy of views. From my perspective, I agree that marrying without graduating can put economic pressures on young couples and distract them from their studies or works. Therefore, it is not a wise decision to marry too early. And I will elaborate on the reasons in the forthcoming paragraphs.
First and foremost, there are myriads of reasons why newlyweds can be adversely affected by marriage. The most conspicuous one is that starting a family unavoidably distracts young couples from their studies. More specifically, when these married couples need to devote more energy and time to the family, such as domestic affairs and grocery shopping, they spend less time learning. Hence, marrying before graduating distracts couples from their studies.
Furthermore, another pivotal facet is that newlyweds face mounting financial pressures as an inevitable consequence of establishing a family. To elaborate, it is irrefutable that young couples who cannot secure a stable income need to pay an increased amount of bills before embarking on a career. For instance, a study conducted by New York University demonstrated that 70% of interviewees agreed that there had been an increase in couples breaking up due to increasing financial strain on families. Therefore, early marriage brings an extra financial burden to a couple's lives.
To recapitulate, considering all the reasons listed above, I strongly disagree that getting married before completing school due to distractions of family affairs and financial stress.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5157480315 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02434220836 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.795960389 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.071428571 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134145741361 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456453240164 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062335104059 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101641217766 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708725477854 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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