It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, there is an ongoing debate about getting married prior to finishing school or getting a job is beneficial or not. While there are certainly valid arguments to claim that as a positive step, in my perspective, it has substantial negative impact on individuals’ lives. In this essay, it is going to examine both sides of the argument with relevant reasons and examples.
To commence with, there are several reasons why I am not in favor of this. Foremost among these is that economic problems. To cite and example, Harvard University researchers undertook a study to understand the relationship between people’s achievement and marry at an early age. The result revealed that those who could afford the cost of living before building a relationship were there times successful and effective than the others. Hence, scientific research supports the hypothesis that economic issues should be seriously taken into account.
In stark contrast, however, opponents believe that it should be noted that people whom have a tendency to marry earlier are far more happy and would, therefore, be able to achieve their goals far better. In fact, quite the contrary, not only do couples tend to enhance their living conditions, but they also show higher levels of motivation as well as creativity in order to fulfill their desires. Additionally, a recent scientific study conducted by Melbourne University has shown that such members of the public are mentally and even physically far healthier than single people, and this means that it is positively correlated with the way we live our life.
To recapitulate, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, my personal sentiment is that had individuals considered their conditions more accurately, they would have been more competent to make the right decision in terms of socioeconomic backgrounds to take action in this regard, accordingly.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 307.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27687296417 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93167571372 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 139.433497537 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651465798046 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1295277801 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932206654304 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328057042014 0.0925447433944 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779916424111 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0546150534389 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635049151908 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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