It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recent days, school completion and career has become an important key factor in everyone life. It plays a vital role in getting basic needs to live our day-to-day life. Hence, getting married before completing their academic or before getting a job is lead them to the difficult life. I completely agree that students should do marry after their settlement in studies as well as in their career. The following paragraphs would shed light on possible reasons along with examples.
To begin with the first notion, there are multifarious reasons are favour to the issues in school drop-off. Firstly, if a person get married during their school times, it will impact his mental health as well as his financial status. For example, a research conducted by High school in United States reveals that people who is got married during their high school are involving in anti-social activities. Furthermore, the age of students do not have world exposure and maturity which make them feel anxiety in their later age.
From the general standpoint, career plays paramount part in every one life to satisfy family desires and make them a dominant person in society. If a person getting married without secure job, their life will fall in the financial fluctuation. Moreover, the family man may not be satisfy his partner desires within a small amount which offer conflicts and mutual separation.
To recaptitulate, I firmly believe that people should not marry before they stand in their own foot, because the dominance will come depend on their degree and career. Therefore, people should put their effort in their studies and make a success in their career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11029411765 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51281318522 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595588235294 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.098587371 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.2857142857 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.25397266985 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184515087853 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704137913154 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784877977588 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112865332951 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698210056613 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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