It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of getting married and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that marriage prior to job stability or completion of academic path is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that marrying late can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From the best marriage age standpoint, marrying at an early age can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that spending more time with one’s beloved partner, as well as counting on the partner’s help are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered that girls have numerous restrictions of personal freedom in their own families. Thus, beneficial ramifications of early marriage and starting a family apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of marriage, getting married before 30’s might increase the consequences of quitting higher education due to taking on too much responsibility. Moreover, fundamental aspects of leaving academic education relate to this reality that the demerits of increasing the chances of divorce pertain to youngsters’ maturity levels. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of marrying early in India is correlated negatively with the rapid increase in the birth rate. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of population statistics.
To recapitulate, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of marrying late far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only the advantages of taking responsibility, prove the significance of growing to maturity, but also pinpoint life durability.
one of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that early marriage. there is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
there are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that early marriage can not only contribute to one’s life but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thank to wide range of advantage it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chance of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, when one follows such a system can they broaden their horizons thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are favour of marriage.
In view of the arguments outlined above one can conclude the benefit of the early marriage are too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92511013216 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83876187116 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57268722467 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8777203067 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.636363636 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00964083139035 0.242375264174 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00423830024346 0.0925447433944 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00902119552921 0.071462118173 13% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00533487895828 0.151781067708 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00548270187459 0.0609392437508 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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