It is important for children to take extra classes or play after school? Discuss both and give your opinions.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47826086957 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51379942362 2.71678728327 129% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613043478261 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.5024630542 278% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 170.3428528 50.4703680194 338% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 315.0 104.977214359 300% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.5 20.9669160288 274% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.33497536946 450% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148529122795 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849014915273 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633613244529 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849014915273 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633613244529 0.0609392437508 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 12.6369458128 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 53.1260098522 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 10.9458128079 244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.34 8.32886699507 136% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.94827586207 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.3980295567 239% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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