Is it okay for men to participate and share the responsibilities of the house and make their presence be felt more in their children's life, or should the mothers be solely responsible?
Nowadays, many men and women share household chores and believe in equality. Many people think it is okay for men to share responsibilities and spend time with their children, whereas opponents are against the notion of the idea and think otherwise. In my view, all the household activities and work should be shared between spouses. This essay will discuss both sides of arguments and thus lead to a conclusion.
Firstly, it has been observed that women do all the household work, whereas men are responsible for earning a bread and butter for the family. While men work outside their children often miss the presence of them at home. Additionally, many people claim that sharing household responsibilities is a moral obligation and men should spend quality time and contribute to errands.
Secondly, sharing work at home reduce the tension among couples and make the relationship stronger than other counterparts. Subsequently, it also reduces the rate of divorce in the family. Children also learn about equality and sharing work from the beginning of their childhood. For example, a study conducted by Harvard University suggests 45% of people who share and contribute to all household activities live in a long-lasting relationship.
In conclusion, as per statements aforementioned, one can conclude that participating and sharing responsibilities between men and women is beneficial; it improves the relationship between spouse and children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45575221239 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16783567515 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579646017699 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6316015011 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299829982023 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102071281672 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659058786649 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181554718941 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571061170854 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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