Recently, the phenomenon of tourism, disadvantages and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that developing the tourism industry cannot be highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that tourism can be a plus for developed countries, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to disagree with chronic disadvantages of tourism. At first, the tourists may damage the environment and pollute the natural sources such as mountains and rivers. However, the tourism industry can benefit society and a country. For example, in the tourist towns, the earnings are higher and there are dynamic economies.
In addition, the tourism industry causes to flourish other industries, which enhances job creation. For instance, recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2017 has shown that the tourism industry injects abundant money to the places that receive tourists and improves the other industries such as transportation system and cooking, which increases the various job opportunities for local people.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on the advantages and the negatives of tourism, I profoundly believe that the benefits of tourism far outweighed its drawbacks.
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first, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68246445498 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06156735549 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625592417062 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1002051981 50.4703680194 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.9 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 7.25397266985 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146184307976 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604464128335 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499345329974 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834358270143 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361348852972 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.96 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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