Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
Today small shops are replaced by shopping malls and big complexes. I think that this will create adverse effect on economy. This essay will discuss about main problems that will create because of this trend.
Firstly, small shops and markets mainly owned by lower or middle class family who do not have other source for earning. Therefore, such families can not survive in the competition and at last have to opt for some other businesses or have to choose some low wages jobs. For example, today in small cities also we can see big shopping malls which already affected many small shops owners as they can not sell items at a competitive rate. So at the end, there is no option for them other than close their shop and do ordinary jobs.
Secondly, this trend also affects village people who directly sell goods to small shop owners. Shopping malls only offer them less profit and for that also they required to pass through strict regulations. In such cases, villagers cannot get real value for their goods. For instance, many well known potato chips companies buy potatoes in bulk quantity with discounted price and due to that in a market, farmers can not get real value of their crop.
In conclusion, shopping malls and big complexes indirectly destroy the nation's economy and therefore government have to implement strict measurement to protect the rights of small farmers and shop owners.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91176470588 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27505004209 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613445378151 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7537134592 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4166666667 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213190358352 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875671520077 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746120013552 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142594419095 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658876961753 0.0609392437508 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.8988764045 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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