Law can change human behavior. Do you agree or not?
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in people believing that law can change human behavior. there is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life as opponents argue that law alone cannot alter a person. it has to be decided by an individual. In my opinion, the law can change humans to some extent and I will explain both sides in the upcoming paragraphs.
there is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that stringent law and order in a country can not only ensure its inhabitant's security but also promotes its economy and prosperity.
For instance, a recent study undertaken by a famous university in London asserted that, due to the extreme laws implemented in the UAE, the crime rates in the Arab countries are very less compared with other countries. people are repelled by severe punishments to commit crimes.
On the other hand, antagonists believe that a person and his society has a crucial role in character formation and laws alone cannot control these behavioral traits. For example, a child who has been brought up under good parents strict guidance won't carry out violations which harm his fellow beings. Another pivotal influence is from the society where they live. Hence, it is apparent that why many are not in favor of saying authority can change human.
Given the arguments listed above, one can conclude that the merits of having powerful laws outweigh the other factors. However, along with the law individuals and societies contribution is required to pave the growth of good future generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94244604317 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62872618113 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629496402878 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6914483545 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269566787315 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833695864667 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952334987022 0.071462118173 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13067737617 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872301963804 0.0609392437508 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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