"For less developed countries, disadvantages in tourism are greater than advantages". Discuss, give your opinion and examples.
The fact that less developed countries has more disadvantages than advantages in tourism was always a debatable topic. Many tourist developed countries and tourists believe that visiting in under developed countries creates many problems to hosts and visited places. I strongly agree with the statement that there are lot of challenges involved visiting less developed countries. This essay would further elaborate the reasons why tourism is detriment with justifying real incidents happened.
First and foremost, it is believed that many under developed countries have high risks for visitors and this is apparent since last few decades. For instance, recently in Bangladesh, a person from Japan and another visitor from Italy were shot dead by the Islamic terrorist group. This incident clearly shows as these places are not only safe to visit but also lack security measures. Thus, it can be concluded that disadvantages are more compared with advantages.
Furthermore, there are few aspects of tourism that may damage the culture of their tradition and harmful to a country. For instance, local people change their lifestyle, customs, languages and way of speaking in order to serve them effectively without any problem. In addition to above concerns, visitors often carry expensive objects like camera, smart phones, electrical gadgets with them and are unaware of surrounding environment, thief's in the local village may target those goods for theft. This example clearly exemplifies, there will be increase in crime rates because of usage of drugs.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that disadvantages outweighs advantages of tourism in under developed countries. In a nutshell, it can be concluded that due to lack of security measures tourism has many negative concerns involved.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun tourist seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many tourists'.
Suggestion: Many tourists
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53191489362 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81612085915 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624113475177 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8644605902 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180707525827 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631956821944 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688222498814 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108957943209 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584666079463 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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