The majority of television news being reported is bad news: wars, famines, accidents and crime. Some people think that television news should be a mixture of good and bad news.
Choose whether you agree or disagree with this statement and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
It is said that bad news is good news . Different person have different opinion in terms of analysing news . Some believe that criminal activities, disaster, accidents and wars ,etc are bad news . However, there are people who consider news should have both bad and good aspects and both kind of news should be telecasted. This essay will be discussing in favour of good and bad news.
I believe , television is one of the reliable and famous means of spreading news all over the world in this contemporary word. In addition, people can access and afford the device therefor, both good and bad news should be telecasted so that people can be aware of the current situation of their vicinity. For example, if someone does a praiseworthy deed in the community , could be a source of inspiration to others and which can bring changes in a society. In the sameway, combination of both good and bad information may contribute equally to aware the people in the nation and they would be alert and aware of the current situation .Thus , people not only can get good information but also be able to take precaution .
On the other hand , there are people who believe that television should always telecast crimes, accidents, or negative issues that are being taken place in the society because they think the good news does not need to be spread.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that there are a myriad of advantages in telecasting news which are mixed of both good and bad. People need to know both positive and negative information in order to be up to date .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74444444444 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60574709241 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507407407407 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3096789662 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.33497536946 300% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432977733281 0.242375264174 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200190624671 0.0925447433944 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112360947132 0.071462118173 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277387350269 0.151781067708 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113226699737 0.0609392437508 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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