Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
It is believed that regions has significant impacts on successes of a person. In my opinion, both areas and people affect each other in a number of ways.
Each region has its own nature, cultures, traditions and customer which creates personalities and incentive of a person. For example, people who are living in middle of Vietnam are poor. The middle land of Vietnam is always drought in the dry season and encounter many floods and storms annually. People here struggle every day to survive and to make a living. Therefore, they have big dreams to have a successful career and to get rid of the poor circumstance. They work very hard, study hard to get rich. Such motivation is important to accomplishment but hardly found in people in the south of Vietnam.
On the other hand, successful people also influence native regions in other ways. First of all, they become an idol for the next generation in communities. Children in those places are likely to become one of them, want to achieve such accomplishment and in return, desire to delicate to their own hometown. Second, accomplished people always remember their obligation to help the native areas. They would contribute to the locals by awarding scholarships to pupils to encourage them to go to school or supporting finance to build more schools for residents. They make an effort to do a favor for their hometown with the hope to create a better future.
In conclusion, I believe that regions has considerable positive effects to create people’s qualities to create their successes, and people will also try to do good things for their country.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96323529412 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7982940923 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8152676147 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.375 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280839552111 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873106192379 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784180751595 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176386194822 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554272361076 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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