Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Many people think regions affect successful persons has always been a debatable topic. People believe that success of person have the mere influence of the region they born. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the statement that native-born place will not have any impact on successful people. This essay would further discuss why I am completely against with justifying reasons and thus lead to an appropriate conclusion.
To commence with, to accomplish anything in life required immense hard work and commitment to the desired goals. Achieving success in life involves so many factors such as determination, dedication, clear vision of future, ambitions, motivation and most important the hard work. Moreover, support from family and friends also play a vital role. Although there is no doubt that living in a cohesive environment will be beneficial but the person who is more disciplined will try to create new ways to reach his achievements, no matter where they are.
Furthermore, achieving success is nothing but earning respectable position and better-secured life. For example, people who marked themselves as examples for others have burnt the midnight oil to reach the highest position in their life. To be more clear, prominent leaders like Bill Gates, APJ and the list goes on are the best examples. From the above example, it is clear that born place will not have any benefits to achieve success.
According to the arguments outlined, one can reach out to the conclusion that achieving anything in life requires his or her immense commitment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23412698413 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78618625315 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662698412698 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6941312532 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.461538462 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206196823993 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802529407887 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128927424519 0.071462118173 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109750465098 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134096693896 0.0609392437508 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.