Media has a high influence on the way people in a society think. Do you agree with this statement? Provide some reasons to justify your answer.
Media plays vital role in today’s world. Continuous feeding by media – whether TV, news, radio or newspaper it has changed our life in both positive and negative ways. It has influenced our opinions, thoughts, and day to day decisions like shopping for clothes, groceries etc.
Firstly, media has positive impact on people’s life by keeping them updated about what is happening around the world. I may be sitting in India but I will be updated with events from USA. They have updates one click or touch away. Social media gave them ability to interact with far off friends and family members.
Secondly, media helps to create awareness on products and alternatives available for buyers. Seller may be sitting remote but buyer has ability to shop better deals for same product through internet. Websites like amazon.com and ebay has shortened distance between buyers and sellers. It has negative impact as well as it effects business of local producers and hence impacting local economy.
There is another side of social media which brought people from far together but distanced family members or friends. People like to spend more time on their laptops, smartphones or living in their virtual world and neglect people around them. This can be seen in any restaurant, market or queues in public places. People are glued to their gadgets.
Hence I believe that media has wider impact on our life. Considering all these points we should use media more wisely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07407407407 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44085310722 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658436213992 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9971163551 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.5294117647 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2941176471 20.9669160288 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116857807646 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365812195317 0.0925447433944 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023665300238 0.071462118173 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623877038952 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282303988291 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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