As national services, which one deserve to receive more financial support, education
or health?
it is often argued on to which sector should receive a larger portion of government funds. The vast majority of people opine that the authorities should increase the budget in health rather than in education. However, others refute this supposition and think that it has adverse ramifications. In my opinion, I strongly believe that governments should allocate more money to education. this essay will first elucidate the pertinent point of views of my assertion, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, it is no doubt that education is a key component to improve the economy of a country. As a matter of fact, the higher the literacy rate of a nation, the more it will achieve prosperity. A primary example of this is the US, which has a literacy rate of 80 percent and is the number one economy in the world. thus, it is quite evident that the education sector must be the primary beneficiary of the huge amount of money from the government.
Furthermore, distributing a substantial amount of money on education will significantly increase employment rate, thus generating more money for the nation. Certainly, more employment means citizens can contribute to the development of their country through tax. For instance, a recent study showed the 75 percent of the government annual budget came from the professional tax. Hence, it is clear that education can help increase a nation's budget.
In conclusion, considering what has been discussed above, it is indeed significantly better to allocate more money to education. I strongly recommend that government should make the education section its number one priority.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16165413534 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9655840554 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541353383459 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.953493477 50.4703680194 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.5333333333 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139909146475 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448656079781 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374721300679 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07982878557 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00881996936545 0.0609392437508 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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