Nowadays most of the people spend more time for their professional work rather then on their personal life. What are the reasons or what are your solutions.
At the outset of new millenium most of the people spend more time for their professional life which was always debatable has now become more controversial and has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend. The following paragraphs illustrate this fact.
To initiate with,there are myriad reasons which trigger the issue and make it worse. Firstly, employees always have a fear in their mind that if they do not work properly their job may be secure, as a consequence, this leads the first step to make their professional life busy. Moreover, nowadays in this modern era every one have a lot of desires, either it is a ambition of becoming popular or buy modern gadgets. Likely, they make their schedule busy which will unintentionally result to spend more time on their work. Secondly, some companies who set targets for employees to do work in a specific time frame. Last but not least, some people do extra work to raise their living standard, for instance, if a person belongs to poor family, head create his image in front of their employer and do extra work to coining money.
Every cloud has a silver lining, similarly, a handful measures should be implemented. Topmost, workers should manage their time and plane a short jaunts with their family so that the communication bridge is covered. Secondly, cut your cloth according to your coat, so that adjust themselves according to own need. Moreover, this issue is overcome if company change their policy of extra work.
In conclusion, it is right that if a person wants to enjoy their personal life it should be incumbent to balance their work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61635349448 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1102459498 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.307692308 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384778815977 0.242375264174 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121986403942 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929365137773 0.071462118173 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231048258719 0.151781067708 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537304615959 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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