Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss
Recently, the phenomenon of working hours and its corresponding impact has sparked an on going debate, which inevitably leads to a moot question, does work load has control personal life? where it is held view that working late hours is beneficial, however many believe that work and life should be balanced. In this essay both side of the argument will be examined with related reasons and example.
From the social standpoint, having a balance life provides a noticable effect in the society which are rooted in the fact that positive outcome and connections with one another are inextricably bound up. According to my experience when i was university student, i performed an academic experiment which discovered the importance of balanced life and job satisfaction can bring happiness in lives. Thus, beneficial ramification of jobs and recreational life apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of income, some individuals are bound to work extra hours to meet the needs of life. Moreover, fundamental aspects of work for the life's improvement pertains to this reality of work,life and balance remain dilemma. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that downside of more hours at work can cause mental and health issues. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of balance life.
To conclude, there are several compelling arguments on both sides, i profoundly believe that the benefits of working regular hours far outweight its drawbacks. Not only working standards hours provide job a satisfaction but also maintain healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3359375 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89437046196 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0557524999 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151290236626 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585956139965 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342723303627 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916760386266 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316697215153 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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