Nowadays television is an essential part of our lives as a medium to spread news and awareness and for some it even acts as a companion What is your opinion about this

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Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?

Today, television becomes integral part of a human life. It offers many interesting features and therefore it plays vital role of a true friend. As per my opinion, Television if used wisely can help us greatly in many aspect of life. This essay will discuss about advantages of television.

Firstly, from its invention, television becomes integral part of our house. Today, every house has this gadget and it offers entertainment, education, news and devotional programs that can help us to gain many information. For instance, today in India, almost 85% of families have television which proves its popularity. Thus, television offers so many programs which can entertain all age groups.

Secondly, television is the most important and handy medium in case of disaster management. Using such gadget we can provide latest and critical information of disaster and can save millions of lives. For instance, many countries today use specific television channels which guide citizens in case of emergency situation. Therefor television plays crucial and vital role to provide speedy and real information to needy people.

In conclusion, today television is not only used for entertainment, it also used to gain latest information according to viewer's interest. Hence, if it is used wisely then can help us a lot to keep us updated with latest information.

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Average: 6.4 (7 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...n if used wisely can help us greatly in many aspect of life. This essay will discuss about ...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...ional programs that can help us to gain many information. For instance, today in Ind...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...ional programs that can help us to gain many information. For instance, today in India, almost 8...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'gain the latest'.
Suggestion: gain the latest
...used for entertainment, it also used to gain latest information according to viewers intere...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...en can help us a lot to keep us updated with latest information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33023255814 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89892466216 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576744186047 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8280222761 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.8571428571 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138561749577 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544290352271 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322663795846 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867539634017 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313633447481 0.0609392437508 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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