The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life.
To what extent give cause and solution.
One of the most conspicuous treads of today’s world a colossal upsurge in traditional subjects. There are a range of factors that account for why this is happening. In my opinion, this situation remedied provides that some effective measures are taken.
There is a myriad reason accountable for this soaring concern. The most preponderant one is that traditional theory is not much creating effect because of modernization. Not only tradition but understands also all subject of different field. Needless to say, all these demerits have a far reaching impact on old and new point.
Step to deal with this problem are many, the most effective once are not remote and complicated, but accessible and practical. The primary one lies in the government should provided library of different subject’s books. Last but not least, to arrange awareness program for educated people about traditional subject by books and audio-video clips. Only when convergent efforts from all sectors are ensured can we expect to see much progress in overcoming this soaring concern.
To conclusion, dealing with traditional subjects are one of the most prevalent issues that face almost all in countries of the world today. Nevertheless, the concrete steps as discussed earlier can effectively strengthen fight against and reduce this growing concern. Its potential impact is indeed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, then, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38990825688 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93179560496 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637614678899 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5214202291 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.9285714286 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0771968341608 0.242375264174 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275393243071 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289448052698 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0487683274113 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220011589171 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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