The only way to improve road safety is to impose severe punishments for driving offences. Do you agree or disagree?
It is the undeniable fact that for providing road safety to the general public, all drivers actions must have consequences. Which can prevent road trauma and improve road safety. This essay will discuss the reasons why it is so important of harsh punishments for driving offences and safety on our road.
Firstly, the only way to teach a lesson to people who break road rule should get harsh punishments such as jail sentence and they can be set as an example for others. According to official data, there are numbers of people who are injured and have died on our road due to the weak punishments. Furthermore, when it comes to traffic-related offences our justice system is very lenient towards offenders.
Secondly, heavy punishment is not the solution. Road safety education should start from school age, way before teenage can sit behind the wheels and understand the consequences of their actions on the road. for example, playing traffic safety advertisements in schools.
Finally, in my opinion, to improve road safety education and training in a related matter is highly recommended also punishments are also essential for offences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...t that for providing road safety to the general public, all drivers actions must have conseque...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...sequences of their actions on the road. for example, playing traffic safety adverti...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ffic safety advertisements in schools. Finally, in my opinion, to improve road ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 1207.87684729 80% => OK
No of words: 187.0 242.827586207 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16577540107 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80131228364 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641711229947 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 379.143842365 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4156810626 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313031519576 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116539392684 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629155114794 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190622920902 0.151781067708 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500252698538 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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