The only way to reduce air pollution is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use your own experience as examples.
Air pollution has significantly increased in last century because of industrialisation and has become a serious concern for next generations. Some suggest that it can be controlled by increasing the prices of fuel while others do
not support this argument. This essay will discuss how raising the prices of fuel will help in controlling air pollution.
To begin with, high prices of fuel will limit its use to common people. More people will prefer to use cheaper modes of transportation which may include use of public transportation instead of personal cars. For example, with the start of metro bus service in Lahore, significant reduction in smog weather has been witnessed in last 2 years. Thus, air pollution can be controlled with increase in prices of fuel.
Secondly, increasing the price of fuel will decrease the dependence on fuel for energy purposes such as domestic and industrial use. People will find alternative ways to fulfill their requirements of energy and encouraging them to use better environmental friendly source of energy. For instance, water can be used for power generation instead of coal which will produce pollution. Therefore, higher prices of fuel can help to reduce the pollution.
In conclusion, increasing the price of fuel will force people to opt for cheaper modes of transportation and at the same time will limit their dependence on fuel as a source of energy. In my opinion, rise in price of fuel will tremendously reduce the air pollution and promising a better environment for our next generations.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1746031746 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00983104051 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531746031746 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2381150286 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.307692308 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239138437898 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107899561452 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597114106868 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151217730489 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348838231884 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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