Parents have more influence on a child's development than school does. How far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with examples from your own experience.
The most crucial days of a child is its childhood, where he/she is taken care of and properly nurtured.
Furthermore, parents have a vital role to play in a child's development, whereas, school also has some
influence on the same. In my opinion, parents are responsible to an extent for a child's well being.
Firstly, parents are the caretakers and the rightful teachers for their children. As a result, the
parents are the true guide and are only concerned that the child goes in the right direction. If a
child wants to take an advice from someone, definitely parents are the one to lead them in the correct
path and distinguishing between the right and the wrong. Therefore, parents play an important role in a
child's development.
Secondly, a child learns a lot from school, especially, from his peers. This could be a true suggestion
or a false one depending upon the child's intellect. For instance, if a child wants some help in his
studies, then his friends will either guide him throughout or they might lead him in the wrong
direction. Similarly, schools have a negative influence on a child to some extent.
However, in schools teachers are there who act as a second parent and might guide a child in fulfilling
his destiny. But, at the end of the day children return to their home and it's the parents who take
care of them. To conclude, it's true that school also has partial influence on a child's development
but apparently, parents have a lot of influence than a school does.
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...s peers. This could be a true suggestion or a false one depending upon the childs...
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...rs. This could be a true suggestion or a false one depending upon the childs i...
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...tance, if a child wants some help in his studies, then his friends will either gu...
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...hout or they might lead him in the wrong direction. Similarly, schools have a neg...
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...nt and might guide a child in fulfilling his destiny. But, at the end of the day ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8893129771 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70761378816 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507633587786 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0324724884 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 7.25397266985 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.12807881773 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.33497536946 431% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204042236549 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829306627943 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621427201101 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816996657578 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596460265987 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.