Parents should be held legally responsible for children's act.

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Parents should be held legally responsible for children's act.

The debate our wheather parents should held legally responsible for their child's act or not is an old one, with attritude of people shifting throughout the debate over the year. Proponents and opponents should make their cases to support their views for this unresolved issue. In my opinion, parents should not be accountable for children, activities and i will discuss its important aspect in upcoming paragraph.

To begin with, there are numberous arguments surrounding my viewpoint but the most important factor that needs to be considered that children's mind prone to change according to their surrounding that parents have no clue. On other word, child's involvement in wrong activities is diract impact of their peer group or company. For example, In India, most of colleges are suffering from gang wars and drug trafficking among student.

On the other side of fence, it is also possible to make opposite case. If can argued that as children spent most of their time with their parents at home and also learn social behaviour, language and descipline from them, so children can get indulge in anti social activities by following the footprints of their parents if family environment is not so good.

In the light above discussion it is fair and justifiable say that parents have least control over their children activities outside the house there are some basic responsibilities that should be taught by parents.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ccountable for children, activities and i will discuss its important aspect in up...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the colleges') or simply say ''most colleges''.
Suggestion: most of the colleges; most colleges
...roup or company. For example, In India, most of colleges are suffering from gang wars and drug t...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the least'.
Suggestion: have the least
...s fair and justifiable say that parents have least control over their children activities ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15948275862 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71355635277 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616379310345 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1943482688 50.4703680194 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322063385047 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121298014933 0.0925447433944 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100969012209 0.071462118173 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194465583517 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120293557186 0.0609392437508 197% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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