Recently, the phenomenon of the advancements in diverse branches and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that inventions in technology are not highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that advancements in computer technologies can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reason to support the advancements in computer technologies as a better invention in the world. At first, the prosperous in medicine help the human to live healthier with a higher life- expectancy. However, many developments in medicine caused by computer technologies. For example, the physicians could diagnose the diseases by medical instruments like MRI that designed with computer technologies.
In addition, advancements in different industries helped people live more convenient. But, the major tools in industrial expeditions are computer technologies. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2014 has shown that almost all advances in industries like agriculture benefit from computer technologies.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the invention of computer is the most important advance in technology and its benefits far outweighed its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83098591549 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38438717822 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629107981221 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5835932555 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.909090909 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147646191405 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554581927855 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453491985789 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941086866636 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344057710741 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 11.5310837438 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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