People are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life. What are the advantages & disadvantages of living in urban areas & rural areas?

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People are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life. What are the advantages & disadvantages of living in urban areas & rural areas?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in every person move to urban areas from rural areas. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are number of arguments is in favor of stance. The most preponderant one in that in urban areas better employment and opportunities of business can not only contribute to so many benefits in urban areas like medical facilities number of hospital made there and living of standard is very high. But also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefits more when it comes to being effective, but they can also in hence the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience needless, to say all these, merits- stand one is good stead, as far as arguments their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
In other hands, some pitfalls that can easily over whelm the potential benefits of rural areas provide clean environment, cheap accommodation and people is open minded. The primary one stands from the effect that by observing the aforementioned trend. People not only realized its gravity, but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussions, when it come today’s ever changing lifestyles. Hence, it is apparent why many are against.
In view the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks the benefits of living in cities are indeed too great to ignore.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
...magnitude of its repercussions, when it come today's ever changing lifestyles. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95970695971 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75739276418 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.1744155511 50.4703680194 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.833333333 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.25397266985 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208158152553 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662508869788 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980943865926 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112172687268 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549145276458 0.0609392437508 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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